Clean Up 5 blogs

I corrected five blogs and found some mistakes. In the following, you can inspect my correction report :

Vincent H :

Hi Vincent,

"Many other fields in the production, design and service
industries also have project managers." You can switch "also" position. I think
"have also" is more correct.

Then, I suggest you another structure for "about the
job of project manager".You can write : "about the project management career"

Virginie R:

I can't post my comment on her blog. But I sent her a mail with
corrections.

"Here I've found several interesting videos about networks, Web
2.0 and professional management. " I think "Here I Found" is more correct.
(Using the past tense).

I'm a student of the engineer's school IMAC."
Then, I suggest you another sentence for your little presentation on the top of your blog : "I'm a student in IMAC engineering school."

Yacine A. :

Hi Yacine !
I corrected some sentences :
"They are the most important
visual effects compagny in the world."

I think "They are the most famous and
important international visual effect companies. "

"They are the best on
animations movies like Antz or Wall e". >> "They have made best animation
movies like Antz and Wall-E."

"So on the google search bar I wright “ILM
Interview” and the first link which is appear was:">>In the google search
bar, I typed "ILM Interview" and the first link proposition was :"

Yann :

Hi Yann !

I found some mistakes.

"until I obtain my Baccalaureat
S". I think "I obtained" (Past tense) is more correct.

"for two years at
the university Paul Valery" => "for two years at Paul Valery University"

Yoann G.
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